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박세은 기자 5레벨 2020.06.03 23:07

You will not very lonely if you have something which can always play with you. It can't become true at the most of people. However, if that something is the robot, you can get the thing that makes you not lonely! This is the today's topic. It's about the social robot that I want to make.

Social robot is the robot which can communion and interaction with people. Also, they can recognize people's face and guess people's feeling.

Today, we're fighting with the Covid-19. This makes us stay at home, and especially children rarely go out because Covid-19 has highly contagious. I am the one of that children and this makes me bored and lethargic.

Therefore, I thought how about to make the robot which can help people who are tired of self-quarantine. I want to make the robot which is like  friend, doctor, teacher, and also like the family. People would want to talk with others, and want to know if they were infected that virus. Also the children should study as they study in the school. Oh, and of course it can do the most of things that the computer can do. If the robot which can make people laugh, chat with people, check their health condition, dependable, and can teach children is built, it might be become very nice robot for many people. This is the robot's appearance that I want to make. Doraemon is not very big because children can feel repulsion at the big things. It has two legs to move freely, and has cute face to make people feel friendly at that robot.This is the robot which is very friendly for anyone.

In short, this robot is the versatile robot. It can do very many things for human. Sometimes this can cause a little problems at communicate with people because this isn't a human. However, this is only the robot that replace human communication so it is judged that there is no need to be completely human.

 

 

 

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Dombo, which was an elephant and had the big ears to fly the sky, was known as an elephant bird. However, Dombo isn’t the elephant bird. Elephant bird, also called as Aepyornis looks simillar with an ostrich, not an elephant. Unfortunatly, the elephant bird is not existed anymore. However, it is important. The progress from the birth to be extincted will be followed.

     Aepyornis was the heaviest and the biggest bird in the world which lived in Africa, Madagascar. It was generally as 3m tall and weighed 400kg. Actually, Dinornis Robustus was the tallest bird, which also called as giant moa, was 3.6m tall. However, the elephant bird was heavier than this, so Aepyornis became the most biggest bird in the world. It was twice as big as a person. Because of their big size, they couldn't fly.

 

The egg of this creature was big, too. The egg was 33 centimeters long, and weighed 10kg. Also, it was about twice the length of an ostrich egg and the size that put toghther the 200 eggs. It’s the biggest bird’s egg in the world.

 

     However, we can't see this animal now. It went extinct. There are some idea about it’s extinction, and this is the most persuasive idea of the extinction of Aepyornis. Many people thinks it dissapeared in the world because of human. It is estimated that people came in Madagascar and hunted them about 4,000 to 2,500 years ago. Also, the poultry which came with the human transmited disease to Aepyornis.

 

 

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  • 선은진 3레벨 2020-06-04 09:30

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    You will not very lonely if you have something which can always play with you. It can't become true at most people. However, if that something is the robot, you can get the thing that makes you not lonely! This is today's topic. It's about the social robot that I want to make. 

    A social robot is a robot which can communion and interaction with people. Also, they can recognize people's faces and guess people's feelings.

    Today, we're fighting with the Covid-19. This makes us stay at home, and especially children rarely go out because Covid-19 has highly contagious. I am one of those children and this makes me bored and lethargic.

    Therefore, I thought of how about making a robot that can help people who are tired of self-quarantine. I want to make a robot which is like a friend, doctor, teacher, and also like the family. People would want to talk with others and want to know if they have infected that virus. Also, children should study as they study in school. Oh, and of course it can do most of the things that the computer can do. If the robot which can make people laugh, chat with people, check their health condition, dependable, and can teach children is built, it might become a very nice robot for many people. This is the robot's appearance that I want to make. Doraemon is not very big because children can feel repulsion at the big things. It has two legs to move freely and has a cute face to make people feel friendly at that robot. This is the robot which is very friendly for anyone.

    In short, this robot is versatile. It can do very many things for humans. Sometimes this can cause little problems at communicating with people because this isn't a human. However, this is only the robot that replaces human communication so it is judged that there is no need to be completely human 그래머 수정요

  • 정유민 6레벨 2020-06-04 07:04

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    전 이해 가능 할텐데 번역을 못해요..........ㄷㄷ

  • 이은채 4레벨 2020-06-03 23:33

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    첫째줄 will not very lonely -> won't be very lonely 혹은 will not be -. 넷째줄 communion and interaction 은 명사입니다. communicate and interact 의 동사로 수정. 여섯째줄 this makes~부분의 뒷부분을 앞부분과 같게 '~하게 만든다' 라는 어휘를 한번 더 넣어 주세요. contagious 앞에 be동사 넣어서 코드브19 is very(뜻을 맞추기 위해서 넣음) contagious 라고 해야 맞습니다. bored -> boring  / to make -> making / 자가격리 하는 것 이라고 고쳐주세요 / 감염된 이라는 뜻 - infected with 입니다 / dependable 은 문맥에 왜넣었는지 전 이해가안되네요... / 막에서 네번째줄 that robot -> the robot / anyone 은 부정적인 의미가 있다 everyone 으로 고치는 게 맞다고 생각 / 막에서 두번째줄 communicate ->communicating / 마지막문장 that -> to전체적인 짜임은 괜찮다고봅니다. 그런데 마지막문장/그전 셀프디스는 길이채울려고썼는지는 모르겠는데 아니라면 빼는게 좋을거같네요. 두번째는 시간이안되서못합니다.. 도움되셨길!

    • 김지율 5레벨 2020-06-03 23:51

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      오 언니 따봉!!

    • 박세은 5레벨 2020-06-03 23:42

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      아아 글고 저게 원래 피피티 대본이라 디펜더블은 그 피피티에 있는거 설명 비슷하게 하는거에양!

    • 박세은 5레벨 2020-06-03 23:39

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      헐 감사해요오ㅠㅠㅠ 진짜 감사합니다아ㅠ♡(소심한핱트)

  • 이영채 5레벨 2020-06-03 23:31

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    피드백이 뭐야?

  • 윤서진 6레벨 2020-06-03 23:16

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    (영어 울렁증)

  • 김지율 5레벨 2020-06-03 23:15

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    ???
    뭐라는지 모르겠어여.....
    (어려운 영어)

  • 정서아 7레벨 2020-06-03 23:13

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    으윽 못읽겠억...

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